austinturtle

WELCOME TO YOUNG WRITERS' SOCIETY!!!!!! I really liked the conflict between Kalyla and Maria. I think it is extremely justified and a good jump into the plot. First off, I'd ...

The story Grandma Jessie recalls is a very relatable experience that a lot of people can connect to. Also, I really like how there is a second person who takes ...

Your imagery is absolutely amazing. The images you describe clearly expresses the emotions you are conveying without explicitly saying them- and that is a struggle I've seen a lot of ...

This was one of the better poems I've read on this site! I really appreciate how you tackled something as serious as grief. For a lot of us, writing is ...

I thought this concept was really interesting and it can be something you can work with very well. Now some overall tips: there needs to be more character development. How ...

First off, let me say I haven't really ever read a work with this exact subject matter before. Of course there probably has been works about things like this, like ...

First off, let me say this is my first review on this site, and also my first review of poetry ever! First off, I like the subject matter of the ...