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Re: The Academy Prologue:
WELCOME TO YOUNG WRITERS' SOCIETY!!!!!! I really liked the conflict between Kalyla and Maria. I think it is extremely justified and a good jump into the plot. First off, I'd ...
Mar 22, 2016 -
Re: Memory Box
The story Grandma Jessie recalls is a very relatable experience that a lot of people can connect to. Also, I really like how there is a second person who takes ...
Mar 22, 2016 -
Re: It's raining, but I don't believe that it's raining
Your imagery is absolutely amazing. The images you describe clearly expresses the emotions you are conveying without explicitly saying them- and that is a struggle I've seen a lot of ...
Mar 20, 2016 -
Re: Numb
This was one of the better poems I've read on this site! I really appreciate how you tackled something as serious as grief. For a lot of us, writing is ...
Mar 18, 2016 -
Re: Psych
I thought this concept was really interesting and it can be something you can work with very well. Now some overall tips: there needs to be more character development. How ...
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: Aware (title work in progress)
First off, let me say I haven't really ever read a work with this exact subject matter before. Of course there probably has been works about things like this, like ...
Dec 23, 2015 -
Re: My Last Thought of Us
First off, let me say this is my first review on this site, and also my first review of poetry ever! First off, I like the subject matter of the ...
Dec 21, 2015