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Hmmm... I'm sorry to tell you that the deadline has been reached and the results are in. However, I will give you a few pointers. It was a little short. ...

Okay,I shall review. First, I liked this. Don't let me. Convince you otherwise in my review. This should be in the fantasy fiction forums, because it has gods and strange ...

Okay, I'm here for reciew no. Two! First of all, I like this: very much. The first few lines have nice flow, and they work well together with the original ...

Hello, me again, reviewing for your review that you won in the competition. They’re too close to five and five is better. They're too close to five. Five is better. ...

Hmmm... Many people have reviewed this already, but I will anyway. We'll call it a 2-for-1 deal, as I can see that the second piece is reviewed a lot already. ...

Hi outofthebox! I'm here to complete one of the reviews that I owe you! Nitpicks up first: I do it so well, pretend to be an all-American little girls with ...

Is turners syndrome when you don't grow properly? There's a girl in my hockey team who has that, and she was telling us about hoe she had to take shots ...

I like it, but it seems to me thnat you (or the viewpoint of the song) are a bit shallow. You haven't talked to him, but you think that it ...

I love it! If only I could write poetry, I would be proud to give my mother something like that! My only suggestion is to make it run better by ...

I didn't notioce if ti was written badly; I was too engrosed to notice. I don't think it was written badly... hang on, I'll check. Nope, It's written well. I ...

I liked it... but I wasn't sure what you were talking about. Was it talking about humanity ruining the earth, and we need to band together to stop it? Or ...

I'm sorry to say that I don't like this. There wasn't much point,it wasn't written well and it was all over the place. My suggestion: It was my first day ...

Okay, first I will say that I lied this, as it explains what God is, why you believe in him (Even if you don't have leukaemia) and it has a ...

I'm npot christian, and I don't really believe in the 'god' that loves us eternally. But I started this contest because I want to know why you believe in God, ...

I like it... but you write like you would talk. A few times you put the word 'like' in too excessively. You also tell us everything, and it moves too ...