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Thanks! I actually did mean it to be humorous, but I probably should have had a better transition. Lindsay

Thanks for the comments guys! I really appreciate it! :) If you have any constructive criticism, don't hesitate to let me know! Keep on writing! ~Lindsay

I agree with everyone else! Don't like the title, and don't use Christianity to talk about sex. It's not polite. Keep on writing, ~Lindsay

Thanks for the encouraging comments, guys. I really appreciate it! :) ~Lindsay "Dreams are inevitable, especially when you're in the middle of them" ~(By me)

Very touching. I can feel the emotion, which shows you are a true writer! Keep moving forward! ~Lindsay "We shall draw from the heart of suffering itself the means of ...

Thanks for all the reviews, they really helped. I'm kind of a novice, so it's clear I have a lot to work on. Thanks everyone! ~Lindsay

By reading that one and only line, I could not tell if the audience was supposed to see this as an incorrect math problem, or a cold and lonely one-liner. ...

I really like your poem, mostly because it expresses the ability to achieve! Keep on writing! ~Lindsay

Thanks everyone for your comments. The reviews were very helpful, thanks for checking out my works. :) ~Lindsay

In the second sentence, try "But the words were there, in black and white" Joining the pirates seems a little farfetched, since the story takes place at sea, maybe the ...

That's cute- good for when someone is young