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Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter Four, The Discovery
Hello! Ash here for another review... There aren't many works I've read where the beginning really catches my attention as yours does. The placement, and use of your story, it ...
Dec 19, 2018 -
Re: 3AM Tomfoolery: Chapter 2
Hi! Ash here for another review... I must say this was an interesting piece and you did amazing! There were only very little minor grammar mistakes. But nothing like a ...
Dec 19, 2018 -
Re: The demon maiden chapter twelve
Hello! Ash here for another review... "A slender hand move to my back" I did notice that you used "move" instead of moved. As there isn't anything such as, "I ...
Dec 18, 2018 -
Re: Writing Prompt #1
Hello! Ash here for a review... I didn't notice many things wrong with this. In fact, it was amazing, and I loved the whole piece. You really do know how ...
Dec 18, 2018