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KJ : Thanks so much. Most of the things you pointed out were actually fixed by me after I read it after posting. That's just an oopsie by me. :oops: ...

Night Mistress & Lucyy : I must thank you both most dearly for staying so dedicated to this story. You have no idea how much I appreciate it. Yes, lucyy, ...

To all Critique-r's above : You guys are AWESOME! FANTASTIC! GREAT! COOL! As you can tell, you all are greatly appreciated :D :D :D Thanks so much! I am beginning ...

YWS Members : To remind you a third time (Sorry!), this used to be named Poisoned Roses my main novel. It has been majorly edited and has a new title. ...

YWS Members : Again, to remind you, this was formally known as Poisoned Roses . It has gone under major editing and has a new title. Hope you enjoy it ...

YWS Site Members : Just so you know, this is formally known as Poisoned Roses my work-in-progress novel. I have done some major editing and did a title change. Hope ...

To all YWS readers : I just changed the title and did some major editing with this so hopefully it is better than the previous draft. I hope you all ...

Hey, Nic. Again, I’m just going to try to point out things that I haven’t noticed before or on the things you have changed. They flanked me on either side ...

Hey, Nic. I just want to thank you right now before I forget for all your super helpful critiques on Poisoned Roses . You have no idea how helpful they ...

Sorry, luc, about the previous review. I loaded it today, edited it, and returned to find out that you had already corrected it. :? So I guess just read through ...

Hey Merry, I'm back! :D And happy to see that you have edited, knowing that you have returned to the writing world :wink: Back to your review... She leaned over ...

Night Mistress : I'm glad you liked this so much :D I'm happy to know that I still can write a decent story! Thanks for taking the time to read ...

lucyy : Ah, you are too kind. I'm glad you enjoyed this :D KJ : Yes, this is the wretched rewrite. Hopefully you will get to actually reading it someday ...

Venom : I'm sorry. I just... I felt like Poisoned Roses wasn't going anywhere for me... I guess I'll just have to see if this will take me anywhere too. ...

Silent music : Thanks so much! :D I'm glad you liked it. And yes, this did help. All comments are appreciated :wink: Thanks again!