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Re: Parce que Je t'aime
Hey, Angel! I feel like I haven’t read anything from you in so long. So here I am, paying you back for all your dedication to my work =] A ...
Jan 16, 2009 -
Re: Wounded
Hey, day tripper. Sorry it took me so long to get to this :? Nichole McWindle slammed the door of her mothers pearl white Chrysler as hard as she could, ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: What Real Vampires Would Do
Poppy Mare, I must say, your title caught my attention right away :wink: I looked up from the book and glared at Ben, who interrupted my “personal time.” I held ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: The Distance Scares Me
Hey, Olivia. Long time, no talk, huh? =] You could walk past him in the street and not look twice at him. How come? What makes him so invisible to ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: Nolan Simmons
Hey, Ta-mara! :D I must thank you for posting on my “Will Review for Food” thread. I feel honored :wink: hehe One look into murky lake green and you were ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: runaway revisited - an exert.
Hey, Wolf :D Thanks for posting on my “Will Review for Food” thread. I feel honored =) hehe I rip out the page with my drawing and scrawl 'screw you' ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: The really short story
Hey, Angels-Symphony :D I’m not sure if this is the one you wanted me to read because it says Chapter 22 so I’m slightly confused but I hope I’m right ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: The Damage of Reality
Well, I am not an expert at poetry but the beginning two paragraphs kind of off-ed the beat a little. I feel like you could do better with them, especially ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: The Underwater Guardian
**Well, I seem to be kind of late in the whole revision thing but hopefully my review still counts for something :? I'm sorry, Scasha, that it took me so ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Tomorrow Does Not Exist - Block I; Part V - REVISED
Hey, Joseph. I know you keep saying that this is probably no better than the last but I have faith in you as a writer. You are a good one ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: The Silver Lining ch 1.2
Hey, Sunny, I’m back for more. I couldn’t resist rushing over here to continue reading :wink: And wow, I found absolutely nothing wrong with this. You had all the elements ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: The Silver Lining ch 1.1
Vampire novel =) Oooo, you know I love those :wink: He had always disliked moving, and now that the move was from on country to another, that detestation intensified. I ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Stepping Into Static - chapter 3
Yeah, new chapter! :D I could tell Kassie had begun familiarising herself with Michael again, but I could see it in her eyes that she was only doing it to ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Kiss of an Enemy
Hey, Berry. Before I start on my review, I must remind you that there is a rule here at YWS. You must review two other people's work before you post ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: In an Instant
Hey, don't worry about starting stories thing. I'm not that good at it either :x Disruption boy strode right up to Dougherty's desk, holding out a strong, brown hand for ...
Dec 28, 2008
