ashleylee

I thought this was really creative. I mean, how your main character talked to the dead and dreading her time when she too would be put into the ground to ...

I thought this was good. I mean, you had me reading on till the end so that was good :) Anyway, I can't really find anything the matter with this. ...

I agree with KJ. She's right about you switching between tenses but otherwise, this was really intersting. I mean, how you described the dragon was really cool. How it defeated ...

I thought this was...interesting. I mean, it was WAY different from the rest of the stuff I've read and that's great :) I mean, I hate reading the same thing ...

I thought this was pretty good. I agree with niteowl however that she/he could do a lot more with this. You should tell him/her that he/she doesn't have to try ...

Oh, I liked the ending of this, however there were some things you could change such as: We have enough trouble keeping her head out of the clouds! Then you ...

Hey, you got me hooked! Yes, it's similar to other stories I've read but by your main character's spit-fire attitude, it should lighten things up a bit! :) Well, there ...

I'm not sure what I think of this. It was interesting and what I liked about it was that it made me think. But other than that, I'm not really ...

First, I think you need to space out your story more. I read all the way through but it is hard to read when your on the computer and everything ...

This was really cute. It was short and sweet and I liked it :) I can't really see anything wrong with it so there isn't really anything more for me ...

I thought this was cute. Yes, maybe cheesy, but sometimes cheesy can be good. Like when he quoted Romeo... Maybe that's just me but I thought that was really adorable! ...

Yeah, I agree with the reviews above mine. This went too fast for them to so quickly fall for each other. However, I think you have something here. It was ...

Oh, this was good! You really could feel what the girl and her brother were feeling and how they wished for their father to come home and be a dad ...

This sounds like an opening to a longer story. It caught my attention and I think you should continue with it. The only thing I read was that it was ...

I liked this a lot! It had that sweet little edge to it that make you smile as you read it. I agree with niteowl that the end was a ...