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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Breakdown-Prologue. First Edit

    Hey, Colleen! Thanks for posting on my "Will Review for Food" thread. I'm glad you asked me for help :D People always told me that you only get one life, ...

    Mar 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Break my Heart and Hope to Die- Chapter 2

    Hi, Selene! I'm answering your request on my "Will Review for Food" thread. Hope I can be of some help to you today :D Number one, I had begun to ...

    Mar 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: deleted prologue.

    Hi ZakkuAlpha! Hopefully I can be of some help of you today :wink: Once I was finished reading with this, I became very depressed myself. This is such a sad ...

    Mar 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Crying Moon - Preface

    Okay, I think you have a very good idea. You have great imagery and eveyrthing flowed together really well. I just think you need a bit more. An 'edge' so ...

    Mar 5, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Shattered Love

    Hiya, VampireBloodRace! It seems that I will be your first reviewer and I hope to be of some help to you today. First Short Story : I really liked this, ...

    Mar 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Shepherd's Lamb (working title) Prologue

    Hello, Maki-Chan! I’m super sorry that it took me so long to respond to your request for a review on my ‘Will Review for Food’ thread. I kind of been ...

    Mar 5, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: 42 (edited)

    Hello, I'm kind of short on time at the moment so I'll try to get as much done as I can and then finish it later. Okay, on with the ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: You Didn't Get To Heaven But You Made It Close

    Hola, Mad-Moo. I was just browsing the forum and happened to come across this and it caught my attention right away. So, here is my review :D But what if ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Say You Mean It - 1.2

    The music sounded off, for some reason. Firstly, is this in a different time and place than the previous chapter? If it is, I would make a little time thing ...

    Feb 24, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Say You Mean It - 1.1

    Kelsey, before I start my review, I see that you have another fan base already. Gosh, I get so jealous of your work. I wish I could plow through stories ...

    Feb 23, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Seventeen Forever 1

    Jazzy! You told me about this piece and I couldn't resist coming over here and checking it out :D This was a really unique idea, now that I have finished ...

    Feb 16, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: My Only Sunshine ch. 2

    Before I start, I just want to point out that it may get confusing with both boys being called ‘Nick’ and ‘Nate’. It might be confusing… just a thought to ...

    Feb 16, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: My Only Sunshine ch. 1

    Sunny, I'm still working on the pieces you sent me via email but I decided to give you this review to help you out as well (also, I love your ...

    Feb 16, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Wallflower Chapter 1

    Angel! I can't resist when you post something and I know I haven't been a very loyal review-er as you have to me so hopefully this pays you back slightly ...

    Feb 16, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: ~Addicting Poison - chapter 4~

    Last chapter; I did them all in one day. Are you proud of me? lol Just kidding, Bri! It is my pleasure to review your work =] Adelicia harrumphed as ...

    Feb 16, 2009


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