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Re: Breakdown-Prologue. First Edit
Hey, Colleen! Thanks for posting on my "Will Review for Food" thread. I'm glad you asked me for help :D People always told me that you only get one life, ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: Break my Heart and Hope to Die- Chapter 2
Hi, Selene! I'm answering your request on my "Will Review for Food" thread. Hope I can be of some help to you today :D Number one, I had begun to ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: deleted prologue.
Hi ZakkuAlpha! Hopefully I can be of some help of you today :wink: Once I was finished reading with this, I became very depressed myself. This is such a sad ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: Crying Moon - Preface
Okay, I think you have a very good idea. You have great imagery and eveyrthing flowed together really well. I just think you need a bit more. An 'edge' so ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: Shattered Love
Hiya, VampireBloodRace! It seems that I will be your first reviewer and I hope to be of some help to you today. First Short Story : I really liked this, ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: Shepherd's Lamb (working title) Prologue
Hello, Maki-Chan! I’m super sorry that it took me so long to respond to your request for a review on my ‘Will Review for Food’ thread. I kind of been ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: 42 (edited)
Hello, I'm kind of short on time at the moment so I'll try to get as much done as I can and then finish it later. Okay, on with the ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: You Didn't Get To Heaven But You Made It Close
Hola, Mad-Moo. I was just browsing the forum and happened to come across this and it caught my attention right away. So, here is my review :D But what if ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: Say You Mean It - 1.2
The music sounded off, for some reason. Firstly, is this in a different time and place than the previous chapter? If it is, I would make a little time thing ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Say You Mean It - 1.1
Kelsey, before I start my review, I see that you have another fan base already. Gosh, I get so jealous of your work. I wish I could plow through stories ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Seventeen Forever 1
Jazzy! You told me about this piece and I couldn't resist coming over here and checking it out :D This was a really unique idea, now that I have finished ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: My Only Sunshine ch. 2
Before I start, I just want to point out that it may get confusing with both boys being called ‘Nick’ and ‘Nate’. It might be confusing… just a thought to ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: My Only Sunshine ch. 1
Sunny, I'm still working on the pieces you sent me via email but I decided to give you this review to help you out as well (also, I love your ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: The Wallflower Chapter 1
Angel! I can't resist when you post something and I know I haven't been a very loyal review-er as you have to me so hopefully this pays you back slightly ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: ~Addicting Poison - chapter 4~
Last chapter; I did them all in one day. Are you proud of me? lol Just kidding, Bri! It is my pleasure to review your work =] Adelicia harrumphed as ...
Feb 16, 2009
