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Oh, James kissed Sophia! I’m so jealous!! :evil: But anyway… This was another good chapter, Merry, but I do feel as though it is choppy. It’s kind of like you ...

Hello, Bri. I'm back! :D I just copy/pasted again cause I'm being lazy (sorry :?) Chapter Four While I waited for Odette to come home, I busied myself by alternating ...

'Ello! (excuse my attempt at being british...:?...I just love british accents....okay, getting off topic *hem*) I'm here to look at your story and I'll just to the quote-by-quote average review ...

Hello, Ali-Cat! This is your first story, huH? Well, away I go to correct it!! :wink: I’m just starting Year 10 and, already, before I’ve even walked into the classroom, ...

Hiya!! I don't think I have seen you around here before. I guess I'll start by saying Welcome to YWS!! I hope you enjoy this site as much as I ...

Hey Kels! Sorry, I won't be able to comment on this fully yet, but I will be doing that tonight. Promise. No lie! :D I have read half of it ...

So romantic, Lillian. :D I loved how you portrayed the vampire not like a monster, but of a victim. Very unique! “You couldn’t.” came a quiet reply in a voice ...

Okay, Lillian, you have a good start here. I think you might want to go into more detail at the beginning about why she moved and more of her thoughts ...

So very sad. I was definitely not expecting that. What a twist, Lucy?! :wink: “To America … and she will never come back, I just know it. Oh Kenso, it’s ...

Ooo, Ella is returning. I wonder what she has for Calla to do? I guess I will just have to wait for the next chapter to find out. I thought ...

I think you caught me off guard a bit, Lillian. (I really do hope that name is okay :? ) At first, I thought I that maybe I was reading ...

All right, Lillian. (is that okay if I call you that?). This was another really good chapter. I felt you kind of skipped over some major parts however. How does ...

Tabithalillian, I am so so sorry that it took me so long to get to this. But you know, with school starting and homework and all that jazz, it’s hard ...

How can her mother expect her to get better when she is approaching the issue like that? Jeesh…but as you can see, I am really growing quite attached to this ...

That is so sad…how can people be so cruel? :evil: You are hitting every emotion dead on. I felt every one of them as if I was watching it happen. ...