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Wow, JC, this was an amazing piece of literature. I must express my gratitude to you for writing this since this was such a well written piece. I read from ...

Again, Angel, you have left me speechless. Why do you do this to me?! I have like three stories now of yours that I have to keep track of! :P ...

Sorry Teddy that it took me so long to get to this. I've been too busy to come on and review yet. But now I have time and I'm ready ...

Hey, Angel! Sorry I has taken me so long to get to this. I've just been so busy with school and such. You know about the end of the tri ...

Chapter Three – His girl, Cerise “Rosaline, breakfast! ROSALINE!” Rosaline awoke with a jolt, her head pounding. Slowly, she slumped up in the very unfamiliar bed, her head cloudy and ...

Yes, info-dump it was. But I kind of liked it like that :wink: It was an interesting introduction. It kept me wondering about the lives of these four people. I ...

All right, this sounds more like a summary or a preface of a stroy than anything else. I'm sorry but this is WAY too short to be corrected properly. Though ...

I'm so excited to read this! :D I've been waiting for so long! hehe The Jane Effect By Angel of Death Part 9: The Night's End The night had come ...

Kels: I see that people are enjoying this story :D As you already know, I think this is your best story so far that you have ever written. You have ...

I agree with olivia. I think that this was a decent piece. I mean, there are so many directions you could go with this; so many angles, ways, ect. But ...

Yeah, your style is very refreshing! :D No body goes outside the box like you did. I especially like the elusiveness of your characters' names. Just "boy" and "girl" simple ...

All right, Krupp, this seems like a very old-fashioned story; I mean, it has that feel, with the obsessed man and the elusive woman. I thought the style was very ...

Yeah, this definitely has potential! I mean, the emotions you have are right on. But you sure leave us with a lot of questions unanswered :? Try to think of ...

Hello, Galerius. Saw your title and it caught my eye right away :D And yes, I must agree with Clup91 that this was very deep. Your use of imagery was ...

Well, Angel, I was just browsing your profile and stumbled across this. Thought it was interesting, since I do enjoy the Twilight series. And let me tell you, it did ...