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thank you!!! i really loved it amazing job ;)

HEHE HEYY THANKS FOR THE GLOWING REVIEW!!!! i always suck with putting pauses in the right places, but thank you for telling me where they%u2019d be good :))) you should ...

yes icy i love your reviews, and narrative is always something i%u2019ve struggled with in poetry but i have no clue how to improve it :(

hi icy!! i actually missed that tense issue, thank you a lot for that :) I still have to develop this a lot more but thank u for the suggestions ...

omg thank you for the kind, not at all harsh words :) I have a lot more poetry published already, definitely go check them out :)) love, ash

awh thank you :( that means a lot to me

thank you so muchhh :)) i haven%u2019t exactly been through abuse but people very close to me have and its based off of their experiences

thank you man :) yeah i know existential dread is a very common poetry topic and i was kinda nervous to post this but im really glad you liked it ...

THANK YOUU

thanks hope! happy writing :)

THANK YOU ELLIE :) i appreciate the very kind feedback!! also little fun fact, the poems about my parents (kinda long story but they cause me a lot of stress ...

thank you cozmo!! i appreciate it :))

thank you man :) i appreciate the kind words!!

thank you imp!!! i really really appreciate the various story parts you gave me because i was pretty stuck myself as to where to take this :))

i'm definitely planning on editing this one cuz its like the very first poem i ever wrote :) thank you for the kind words mr. herb!!