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Hi :) I find it cool too formatting the poem in the middle, it's different. Thanks for the review & you too have a good day.

hey ^^ ya i never pay attention to punctuation. Thanks 4 the review :)

:) thanks Baidirai. You're right; deep feelings always make great works, not saying mine is.

It's true life & death are never the same, but you never know which is better until you try them both. Who knows? May be death is the beginning of ...

hi Duke; first thanx for the advice, it seems very helping. I usually don't pay attention to the punctuations :) glad you liked it and i'll try to add some ...

hi snoink; "I closed my eyes for a moment,

Hi tgirly I don't really have critical thing to say. Audy and HarryPotterRocks didn't leave me a thing to say ^_^ Anyway, I loved your poem. The way you described ...

Snoink.... Hi, About your first question, I just like the orange, that's all. However! You can totally make the English version work too... just replace "tone" with "tune." The word ...

Hello Lavvie oui, je parle française. Un peu, c'est-à-dire. However, I'm disappointed that you didn't incorporate some French lines into your second stanza! I think it would tie everything together ...

Hi PenguinAttack First of all, Thanks a lot. I'm really glad that you liked my poem. Well, I my self like second version. :-D You should be pleased with this! ...

Kylloras, Thanx for the reply. It is helpfull, indeed. When all my fears drown, "When my fears all drown," sounds a little better since it more closely matches the stress ...

Hi HarryPotterRocks Thank you very much for your post. You were really helpful, especially with spelling mistakes. I don't know how I missed all that, but it happens when we ...

Hello Thanx alot,Rosey, for your comment. As a matter of, fact I don't know much about poetry; so your notes did really help me. Beside, English is not my mother ...