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artybirdy

She's a hopeless dreamer . . . .

  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: His Dirty Deed | Unedited

    I'll try my best.

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: His Dirty Deed | Unedited

    No problem! I was actually searching the statistics of reported sexual crimes, for my college assignment, and almost all of them were towards women. Then, I thought, "Hang on, that ...

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Film Re: An introduction of CID.

    No problem! :) That's great! I'm sure it's much better now.

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Theatre Re: CID ~ Case1 : The Mystery of killer Pen

    No problem! Glad I could help. :)

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Theatre Re: CID ~ Case1 : The Mystery of killer Pen

    No problem, @Wolfie36

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: His Dirty Deed | Unedited

    Thanks for pointing out the errors, and for this detailed review! Glad you liked it. I'll try to edit it as soon as possible! :)

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: His Dirty Deed | Unedited

    Looking forward to reading it. :)

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: His Dirty Deed | Unedited

    No, thank YOU for taking the time to read my story and understand its message. It means a lot! I'm glad I could bring this issue to light, and I ...

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: His Dirty Deed | Unedited

    Thank you for your review! That's very kind of you. I'll edit this story as soon as possible. I'm glad I could do it justice. Thank you for your encouraging ...

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: Father Doesn't Like The Noise | Edited

    It's fine. :) I mentioned her briefly, so the last line makes sense.

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Stupid writer's block.

    That's awesome!

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Pills / Needles

    I'm speechless! It was so beautifully written, and it isn't confusing at all. I loved it, especially how you managed to give us both perspectives. Well done!

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Suhaag Raat

    No problem! Ah, I understand. Thanks for telling me. :)

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Horror Re: A Desperate Situation ch. 3

    That's fine. It happens to everyone. Of course, I enjoyed it! I'll "like" it now. :D

    Jun 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: Cultural Restrictions | Unedited

    Thank you so much for this detailed review! I greatly appreciate it. You have raised good points, and I agree with all of them. I'll work on improving this piece ...

    Jun 16, 2015


On some days, my will to write disappears faster than a donut at a police station.
— Arcticus