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Re: untitled chapter 1 -Launch
It definitely sounds and feels better! The flow is more continuous to me now. Keep up the good work!
Jan 2, 2016 -
Re: All Hail Dungeonlord Racetrack
This is the first marching band related type story I've read on here xD I'm not in drumline (flutist, trumpeter, and HOPEFULLY 4th string snare in my school's winter percussion ...
Jun 15, 2013 -
Re: Wisdomatch - Chapter One
Well, my quote boxes love to mess up on me, but I think you can figure out the somewhat, terrible format I somehow got myself into xD
Aug 27, 2012 -
Re: PR: The Conjurer Wars - Ch 3 part 1
Thank you!
Jul 19, 2012 -
Re: Blood Rage Ch3
I realized that half of this is in a quote box within a quote box. Quote-ception. /fail. xD
Jul 14, 2012 -
Re: PR: The Conjurer Wars - Ch 3 part 1
All shall be revealed in time. :D And he's a Junior; it was a small hint at the beginning of Chapter 1 that was probably hard to catch xD And ...
Jul 12, 2012 -
Re: When Love is Lost
This reminds me of the song "Forever And Always" by Parachute. If you haven't heard it, you should listen to it; I think it fits this poem fairly well. This ...
Jul 2, 2012 -
Re: Unbroken, Chapter one, part one.
I don't really have much to actually legitly review on, mainly because there isn't much I would change about this! It's very good, in my opinion. I like the depth ...
Jun 27, 2012 -
Re: The Heart of a Career Chapter 1
First thing I want to say it - Wow. Really great job on this piece. Fair warning though, I've never read the Hunger Games, so please forgive me if I ...
May 9, 2012 -
Re: Thursday- YWS chat Parody
...You just blew my mind. O.o
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: -
Thank you Audy and Soulkana for the improvement advice :] I don't think I'll edit this one, so I can have this as a reminder of my first work here, ...
Sep 19, 2011