arspoetica

Amazing use of imagery, this is a heck of a poem. I love the twist, and i'm glad you said the clouds were sad. In poetry you tend to see ...

Well first of, you need to work on your grammer. There are a lot of mistakes in there.... what do you do when it dont doesn't feel the same? But ...

The structure of this poem was my favorite part by far. With every three lines you added a new piece of summer to the puzzle, everything seemed to flow pretty ...

You have a very powerful piece there, it seems to ooze emotion. You have a lot of imagery (Which is very good.) and this piece definitely inspires emotion, which is ...

This made me smile. Anyone who can take a gruesome, depressing topic and make me laugh throughout most of the story did an amazing job. When Wayne went into the ...

One line in particular to me stood out as needing a little rephrasing. so perfectly was it all set up. Just try rearranging the words to get a smoother flow, ...

Amazing story! The plot was magnificent, and it was executed very well. I am, however, very curious as to who this Maggie character is, and her connections to the family. ...