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I like the description. I can just imagine the monsters. Maybe some description on the main character. And I can't see Tohru fighting, the main character, maybe, but not Tohru. ...

I've only read some chapters of the manga, but I know what's going on. I think your story is really good! You might want to describe what the characters looks ...

This is kind of random. The ending is kind of rushed. Also, Hermione doesn't like Harry, she likes Ron. It's a very funny story! I like it! Its a little ...

I love this movie too! It's really good. launched into a volley of questions. “Are you delivering your DNA?” “Yes Makensi.” “So you're going to be an avatar driver?” [/quote] ...

Great plot! It's really good. There are some mistakes though. Thump, thump, that is the sound Katelyn’s heart made when she made her horse speed up. Katelyn and her sister ...

The front was rushed alright. It's great though! I think you used the word "mooch" too much. You might want to find a synonym for it. You could use the ...

Very good description! I can just imagine everything, As the lightening flashed and the rains sliced down, as the clouds moaned and the thunder roared, as the moon lay tranquil ...

I like the descriptions! It lets the reader imagine what Gray and Claire look like. The word "Spring" though isn't supposed to be capitalized. Also, the story is called "Black ...

I've never played a Harvest Moon game before, but I've got Rune Factory 2. It's good, but you need description. The only description I saw was when Popuri ran into ...

Okay, there are some mistakes. Claire struggled to carry the two large grocery bags as she walked from the super market towards her farm. She didn’t go to the super ...

problem? you need the Solution of Evolution, once there was a little fish swimming in the sea, but he saw the ocean as a cage and just wanted to be ...

There's so much emotion in it! I love it! It's very touching alright. But you probably should cut the poem in to lines and stanzas because it's pretty hard to ...

Lots of good books that people have already said Harry Potter, it's wonderful! The plot, suspense, everything is great about it! Percy Jackson series. Love the humor in it! Everlost. ...

You should read the Percy Jackson series. It'll definitely help, because lots of old characters form the Percy Jackson series are in the Lost Hero. It's really good though. I ...

Percy Jackson is a great series! Rick Riodran is writing two new ones. Ones about Egyptian gods and the other one is another series involving Greek gods. Has anyone read ...