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My first thought when I started reading this was that it was rhyming, which is always a challenge to figure out what words rhyme with others. I of course noticed ...

This is short, but it does explain what a lot of people have gone through, in a way. I like the fact that on each line, another time frame goes ...

As the title says, the different parts of the poem are in different places, referencing the scattered pieces of it. I personally like the way it was written and it ...

Let me just start off with this-your poem is amazing! I like to see things like this. A poem that can sometimes relate to you, but at the same time, ...

I love the flow of this poetry, it really brings you in, and then it subtly lets you out. This stillness, and feeling of being calm, while still seemingly still ...