arianaSarroyo

Hi there! My name is Ariana and I'm going to (attempt) to review this. Okay, so to start off, I have to say that I love dancing too! What is ...

Overall this was good but there were a few minor errors. "River tried to reason" (Where is the punctuation?) "So," said River, balling up his fists "what you're trying to ...

Hi there. Well I have to say that this is long but worth the read. From thr beginning it was very eloquently written, each line complete with some form of ...

Hello! I'm Ariana and will make an attempt to review your work today. So, to start off, I would like to mention the things I liked. I liked your use ...

Well! It's a bit of a coincidence I think that I was just thinking about Edgar's "The Raven" earlier today! :) Anyway, as a fan of The Raven, I have ...

Hi. So I have to say that I didn't mind reading this poem at all. It was very carefully and elaborately written, with strong figurative language and imagery. I liked ...

Hi there...I liked the empathsis on the marks. It made me curious to know more about the marks as the story progressed. Now I felt a little confused about this, ...

I'll start off this reviewing by commending you on your broad use of language. You took an idea and made it better by wording it correctly. While this is good, ...

Hello there! :) Ariana with your review. Okay, so to start off I do have to say that this was quite the lengthy piece. Your started off well describing aspects ...

Hey there! Ariana here with your review. This, in my opinion was a very well written piece. The langugage that you used here was excellent and it made the piece. ...

Hi. Well I didn't cry but this was quite the depressing piece. The part of about the funeral seemed so personal-I loved how you described the denial you felt. I ...

This is a really beautiful poem. I feel like I can relate to it because I feel very depressed sometimes, even though I try to ignore it. What I really ...

I'll start off this review by commending you for your excellent usage of strong imagery here. I found myself able to imagine what it was you were writing about, which ...

Hi there. This was intense, I must say. But it was I believe rhythmic. It had a bit of a "beat" to it, somewhat like a song. It was very ...

Well then. This was quite the lenghty piece! However, it was entertaining so that made up for it. There were many areas that I liked, such as the humor and ...