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I liked the change tone, it was nice to have a break after the three depressing chapters. While I felt you did a really good job digging into the characterization ...

Hi, as I continue reading your novel I just get more and more intrigued by the story. Starting off with us finally learning Hayden's backstory. While it's nice to finally ...

The end of this chapter just hit me, oh my gosh. You did a fantastic job with he tone change here, as the story started all happy, going to the ...

I really loved the punch (not literally punch, more punch in her personality) Miranda had in this one. I hope in the later chapters we get to know the real ...

Hi, I thought this short and sweet chapter was really cute. I love how you put thought into having them meet at the same place Hayden confessed his feelings for ...

Hi! I quite liked the first chapter I can't wait to read more. You did a really good job describing the moment to bring the readers in from the beginning ...

I love how playful and silly this Act is. Obviously with such a silly idea you could've went crazy with it and made the story nonsensical but you still kept ...

Hi, I quite like the scene. I felt the dialogue was really realistic and it was easy to tell the relationship between the characters and the scene played out. Overall ...

Hi, I really liked this first chapter! I thought the preschool idea was really cute and you did a really good job at keeping the fun and playful tone through ...