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It's on my profile actually, but if you can't find it I can always try to email it to you. That would be great if you could help. For some ...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. I'm kriffing blushing! You mean it? I mean... I'm literally shedding tears right now

I don't struggle with substance abuse but I do receive therapy for depression, severe anxiety, and psychosis, so knowing you're here verbally over the chat validating me and giving me ...

I changed the line your mentioned up a bit. Do you like the fixes?

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Thanks for the review! I actually really like the suggestion you made, I'll add it as soon as I have time! Thanks!

I love Rudy Francisco!!! I don't mind you changing the words, as long as it doesn't take away from the message. Btw, what did you change because I might add ...

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That's really cool

You're welcome!

Yeah it sounds better, you're right. Thanks! I just changed it.

So how about just "grand entrance without the stage right. And "swan carving underneath his steps." I kind of want to keep swan there because of a subtle reference to ...

Oh man. I can't do that. I need water. I wouldn't be able to last that long without drinking something.

PS: Are there any lines you think are muddled or overcrowded? Any necessary lines or words? I'm usually good at pointing those things out, but sometimes I miss things.