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Thanks Bhaavya

Ok... thanks

Thanks for reviewing

Thank you for reviewing:) I'll see to the faults.

Its my pleasure to encourage a budding poet. So which club are u panning to join?

Only the stranger sentence is a bit short. Otherwise the rhyming scheme is good as could be( at least according to me). Who even cares about the wording if it%u2019s ...

Hi. Well written

Thanks for the review, Fabiha. I%u2019ll post the second part soon.

Hello Dreamy! Thanks for the review. Hmmm.. now that I have created the suspense of an incomplete story, I think it%u2019ll be better to create a second part. There I%u2019ll ...

Thank you for reviewing

Oh... I got it now!

Thanks for reviewing. As for the metaphors, similes, etc. .. I%u2019ll need time to change my writing style. Sorry if it reduces the fun . I will try to do ...

Thanks awfully for reviewing and sorry for the mistakes. I have edited some of the petty mistakes. I can't change the rhyming scheme now though. Maybe the new formatting could ...

OH! It is i the literary spotlight!! I did't see it before. CONGRATS!!

Giving vague titles is actually a unique idea!! Well, other titles for this poem could have been-'The Faceless Beast'(referring to self-hatred) or 'Dwelling Inside My Heart' or something like that. ...