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Thanks for your encouragement.

Thanks, I will try to improve the poem. XD

Thanks

Thanks, will try to improve what you suggested.

A nice poem. I like how you have portrayed the image of a writer. Your rhyming words are very nice as well. Everything is perfect just the way it is.

Thanks, I have corrected that.

Thanks for reviewing my work. Will try to follow your advice.

Thanks, I will try to benefit from your review

Thanks, look forward for your comments again.

Thanks for for review. I will ponder on what you wrote and try to make it better.

Thanks, I will look over what you said and try to improve it. Thanks.

I really like your style of writing and dont understand why you call it short... Its the perfect size. I also love the .way I arranged the stanzas. A bit ...

A great job done. The comical theme was quite interesting and I liked your ending. Your colourful adverbs and adjectives made the poem easy and fun to read. Your rhyming ...

I love the way this poem gives you a deep sad feeling. The short lines sound pretty though they are very short. Work on your rhyming words and your arrangement ...

I love the way this poem gives you a deep sad feeling. The short lines sound pretty though they are very short. Work on your rhyming words and your arrangement ...