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^ lol

I apparently forgot I reviewed this before I reviewed chapter 2. I'm going out of order....OH WELL. I love this series.

I laughed so hard when that was the only few things you nitpicked at. I'm also really awful at switching between past and present tenses, first person, ect. I just ...

You're awesome. :)

That's intriguing. Why did you choose to go that way? It's different...and awesome.

Amen to that...writing is very hard lol

Thank's so much for the review! I hate rhyming poetry and I can totally see how the structure messes it up, though. I'll take time to edit it once I ...

it has to be [i] [/i

try putting lalallala

Thank you very much! I really appreciate it :) I have a couple more. Once I knock out this review thing they have going on Sunday, I'll have plenty more ...

I appreciate you commenting and I'm aware that there is probably grammatical issues, however...this story is not what most people expect. Andrew has nothing to do with anything, he's just ...

Thank you bunches for the feedback! I think that it was meant to be overwhelming, but able to be understood. Love/heartbreak is an overwhelming feeling where you simply have no ...