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Re: The Mariner's Plea
This is simply amazing! I love how it reminds me of the sirens myth for example the lines: "And still that eerie melody That's calling from the deep, And still ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: My Heart
Thanks so much I wrote this shortly after my boyfriend told me that he didn't love me on valentines last year. I was devastated because it came out of nowhere ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: if the streets touch the sky
I enjoyed how deep this piece was. You gave enough to grab the readers attention and let them figure the rest out for themselves. This skill I feel is truly ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: Diary of a Deicide, Part One.
I am glad I could help those are just some things as a reader I had questions to. I found the suspense good but there was too much suspense and ...
Feb 12, 2015 -
Re: Promise (Rough Draft)
I really like this! I think you should continue it!
Feb 12, 2015 -
Re: Book
I totally agree I think you captured all the potential of a book in this!! I
Sep 28, 2012 -
Re: At Seventeen - The best time of my life
I really like this good job
Sep 28, 2012 -
Re: Termination
thank yall so much for reviewing my work i know my grammer isnt that great but the way i put it makes sense to me i really appreciate yalls advice ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Termination
Hey just a little info if you tell me about my title you are doing no good i am not going to ever change it and i have a lot ...
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: Termination
Hey just a little info if you tell me about my title you are doing no good i am not going to ever change it and i have a lot ...
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: Emily Hope Ridings
LEAVE ME ALONE ABOUT THE PUNCUTATION IT IS JUST A ROUGH DRAFT OFF OF THE TOP OF MY HEAD WRITTEN FOR MY NIECE SO PLEASE DROP IT!!! :evil:
Nov 14, 2009 -
Re: Emily Hope Ridings
thanks guys that is awesome it is just what i wrote off the top of my head and yes i can write good poetry chinchilla girl it is like my ...
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: Emily Hope Ridings
Best poem I have ever read. Awesome job Katie!!!!! 8)
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Termination
I have not had time to update yet but i plan to run with it. I like this story but you should check out my other storie in fan fiction ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: Kat Hope Ch. 1 & CH 2
wow girls i know it is good but i will write it in another title like Kat hope Ch.3
Jun 3, 2009
