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Damn. This is some great stuff. I love how it isn't mushy love stuff. I needed a break from that. I like where this is going. I have nothing bad ...

I really really really like this. It has a lot of emotion. I like how you talk about wanting to be a kid again, but know it's impossible. The line ...

Im digging this more and more. Make the baby be what you want it to be : ]

"Try not to think of him" I love that part. So far it's great. I don't know much about vampires, but this has me intrigued. :] Andrew.

This was pretty cute, and I think you were just going for a little funny verse, so good job!

I should say, to all of you who read this, this is only a segment of a much much longer story. I don't throw random characters into a room and ...

Lalaland is cute, and Advil PM is funny. Maybe you could use both? Something like "to the shores of Lalaland, where the waves (beach?, I'm not sure if Advil PM ...

This is some great stuff. I like the word choice and the ideas. Your word choice uses words that we all know, just don't use to often. I love the ...

I'm glad that your having fun cheering. I think you could have incorporated that stereotypes against cheerleaders are wrong a little bit more. But good luck this year with your ...

I was expecting the flame to start to cry flames and set his surroundings on fire, but I like this ending better. The thought of being alone in the world. ...