anabelsinclair

I enjoyed reading this; particularly your protagonist's descriptive diction, and her nuanced personality. It's important to strike the right balance between the 'ah silly me' depictions of Alice and t

I enjoyed the quiet passion of this poem, it tempers the powerful words and emotions you're trying to convey. My only issue is with the first statement, "Envy?" In my ...

Awww, what a horrible situation! You are an excellent writer, with firm enough control of literary devices, memes and popular culture to make your character very likable. And I totally ...

I like Amethyst Night and I like the Craft school setting; even though we've all got JK Rowlings to thank for the instant allusions to Harry Potter whenever anyone even ...

I don't know much about the context (note to self, read earlier chapters) to give a well informed review but I believe I can say something or two about the ...

Good read. I honestly couldn't find much to nitpick about this. Very interesting dialogue between protagonist and the other characters, it took me another read to appreciate the sarcasm... The ...

Wow.... That was nicely done, in my humble opinion. Your character has a strong voice, and I commend the excellent use of description to portray not just her emotions but ...

Wow...really dark, this one. The narrator has a strong voice and you gave solid description of his transformation. Here are a few things I noted: 1. Punctuation: There are lots ...

I definitely like the humor in this preview but there were a few hiccups I noticed. 1.The dialogue format is unique, but it would be helpful if the human speakers ...