Young Writers Society

Hey, I'm Amie and I will be your reviewer today :) First of all, let me just say that this was simply charming. It was really refreshing to see Death ...

Hey Sinnerboy :) glad to finally see you on here. Sorry it took me so long to get around to this but here I am now. The name's Amie, and ...

After reading Charlie the Cheat I had to check out your other poems with morals and I'm so glad I did. You definitely did not disappoint. Again, your rhyming scheme ...

I too thoroughly enjoyed this! The rhyming scheme never felt forced so the flow of the poem was very consistent. I have only a few minor nit picks... This wasn’t ...

Hey, Amie here to review :) You appeared right by my side, Giving me air to breath e , Lending me your strength, Carrying me through it all . You ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be reviewing tonight :) So I don't really have any nit-picks with this piece. It's charming. The only thing I would say is I'm not ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be reviewing tonight :) This is lovely, I love the relationship between the two of them that you've started developing - maybe you could experiment ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be reviewing tonight. :) Firstly you're rhyming scheme is very successful, it doesn't feel forced at all, which means that the flow and rhythm of ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be reviewing today. For Kakagirl the SMTWTFS stands for Sunday, Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday, Saturday as they would appear on the pill box. After ...

Hey, I'm Amie and I'll be reviewing your poem today. Everyone's already covered the grammatical and spelling mistakes so I won't go into that. But like Stella said, it's a ...

I too quite enjoyed this poem of yours. You obviously have talent in your writing. I loved your ending, it sounds so real and poignant. It's saying so little and ...

Hey, here as requested :) Dr. Levitt peered down at me, sitting small on the faux leather coach couch in her office. She was waiting for me to answer. New ...

Hey I'm Amie and I'll be your reviewer today :) NIT-PICKS And I am so sick This isn't following on from anything so the and is pretty void. Of sitting ...

Hey, Amie here to review. & for the sake of diving right in... What a lovely piece of poetry! I agree with one of the wonderful reviewers before me, in ...

Hey! Amie here as requested to do a review :) So I'll dive right in. I sill still had enough energy left in me to instinctively elbow my attacker in ...