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Thanks guys ya...that was an accidental misspelling. My bad. I'll PM you guys when I have more time to explain the other things you pointed out. Thanks for the reviews. ...

I like this. I can just feel the anger in it. Good job.

I like this. I can just feel the anger in it. Good job.

I like this. I can just feel the anger in it. Good job.

Thanks for clearing that up for me.

Thanks for the comments. :) I don't know what to say but just thanks. Ya, I'm special like that.

Thank you for the reviews. This poem is actually based on a dream I had, well, more like nightmare. How messed up is that? Oh well. Thanks again and please ...

Okay, thanks for the reviews. :) And sorry I did re-read it but I must've missed the whole thing. Sorry, editing right after this.

Thanks guys. I know that this needs a lot of work. But this isn't a 'sad poem'. I was actually intending it to be an angry poem. When I wrote ...

I was actually thinking that exact thing. About turning it into a short story. Well, this is just a start of an idea so I'm not completely done with it. ...

Okay, one minute. I feel kind of guilty because I was laughing. But I wasn't laughing at the poem, no I was laughing at myself because and I quote I ...

I didn't make many changes but did that help?

Sorry, just had a fight with a friend and this came out. I didn't really think about it much. First: stepping back was a metaphor because we were talking on ...

Thank you for the comments, I'm going to put the entire thing into stanzas. I'll take your advice into consideration but I think I'll just go with what I feel ...

I loved this poem. And I also thought of Maximum Ride (awesome books!) while reading this. I wish that I had wings, you make it seem so magical and I ...