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I really love this! The way you wrote it is as if the narrator is sobbing uncontrollably and gasping for air in between phrases (at least that's how I imagined ...

Thank you for your review! Will take your suggestions into consideration. :)

Thank you for your review! Thanks for the tip to make my works more subtle. I believe applying it will make my writing more rich. :)

Thank you for your review! Thanks for the tip to make my works more subtle. I believe applying it will make my writing more rich. :)

My pleasure!

Thank you for your review! Also, I like your interpretation of the last three lines. It was different than my thought process on it but your explanation works perfectly well, ...

You're welcome! Thanks for reviewing my work, too. Looking forward to hearing more from you :)

I have reviewed one of your works already :D Although I haven't perused any of the MaryAnna episodes just yet (life's demands take a toll hahaha) Will try to look ...

Sure! Which one would you like me to look over?

I just realized my emoji turned into some string of words hahaha Thank you so much for your review! :)

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Thank you so much for your review!

Thank you so much for your review! This helps a lot :D Ah yes, that's a good point about adding description to the characters hehe I will keep that in ...

This short piece of fiction contained an incredible amount of emotion. I love how each sentence and word mattered to the story. The flow and cohesiveness of the story is ...