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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: LC Excerpt 3 part 2

    Hello! It's my first time to be reviewing some of your work I believe. You have quite an interesting piece of work here, perhaps more war and action filled than ...

    Jul 4, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: King of the Court - 14.5

    Although I haven't read the entire story, I really loved how you wrote the ending of the story. Satisfying, heart-warming, and overall lovely. As I do, I will discuss the ...

    Jul 3, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sky of Seasons Chapter- 3.2

    Hello! The alpaca has come. Will be leaving a short review about this. As I usually do, I review the parts that I find crucial to the story and the ...

    Jul 3, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: Calamity and Her Whims, Chapter 3

    Okay, I should stop reviewing the latest chapters instead of starting from the first chapter. But I don't know when I'm going to stop, so I'm here now! YAY. Dropping ...

    Jul 3, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Repercussions: Part Eight

    Hello! This is the first chapter I read for your story "Repercussions" so pardon me if I mention something that could have been explained if I read the previous chapters. ...

    Jul 2, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: PftPP- Chapter 1.2

    Greetings! This is a continuation from your previous chapter I believe. I'll be leaving a short review for this :D I find it quite hilarious how being late is shown ...

    Jun 30, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter one- The Beginning

    Hello! First of all, welcome to YWS! Glad that you're already sharing some of your work to us. Honestly, I wish I found this website earlier because I know it ...

    Jun 30, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Dear Human: NOT a Turtle

    I love the spunk of the turtl- I mean tortoise here. They seem EXTREMELY annoyed by the mix up of tortoise and turtle. HAHAHA This is a cute little poem ...

    Jun 30, 2023
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Basement Window | Strange Sights

    For some reason, the vibe of this story reminds me of a piece entitled "In the Hall of the Mountain King" by Grieg. I suggest you give it a listen. ...

    Jun 29, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: God d*** it, Why?

    Through the lens of a person who has not experienced love and is probably repulsed by the notion of it, this poem is an ode to their first experience of ...

    Jun 29, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Year I Lost One of my Best Friends

    Before my review, I must say my deepest condolences. I know it must have been really hard to deal with the loss of dear Cookie and I applaud how brave ...

    Jun 29, 2023
  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic Re: To change how I live again

    Hello! Dropped by to leave a quick review. I really enjoyed reading this story. I once wrote a story that also touched on several philosophies in life. And I have ...

    Jun 28, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When Pigs Fly and Griffins Soar

    Hello Book! Welcome to YWS :D came by to drop a quick review on this lovely poem When pigs fly In the bright blue sky And Griffins soar Above the ...

    Jun 27, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: I Knew Chapter 26

    Hello! Just wanted to first say thank you for reviewing all my other works :D It appears you are writing a mystery story just like me! I could surely learn ...

    Jun 26, 2023
  • Short Story » General, Fantasy Re: Time & Space (Part 4/5)

    Hip Hooray! The fourth part of "Time and Space"! I enjoy reading this because it inspires me to finish my own little project (albeit longer than 5 parts). Thanks for ...

    Jun 25, 2023


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