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ally1212

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Ega and the life of Raider Ch1 the lost dreams and pain

    It's really good! Just thought I should let you know. I really like the characters so far and the mouse is awsome! Can't wait for the next chapters! Your friend ...

    Nov 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Lost and Found

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    Oct 19, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Be Perfect

    I completly forgot to edit thanks for the reminder. Man that was dumb!

    Aug 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If My Life Were A Dream

    To awnser you I would have to say that only the first stanzas need working on I hope that helps you enough!

    Aug 8, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Fallen Angel

    It was great. I love the characters and I thought it was really well writen! Good job

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Midnight Wolf

    Amazing. You were very descriptive and I really like that. The ending was also very nice.

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Lost, Chapter 1

    It's really good. I like the plot very much. I also really like Bubbly. I think you captured cild innocence perfectly. I can't wait for more!

    Jul 5, 2011


If a nation loses its storytellers, it loses its childhood.
— Peter Handke