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Re: Ega and the life of Raider Ch1 the lost dreams and pain
It's really good! Just thought I should let you know. I really like the characters so far and the mouse is awsome! Can't wait for the next chapters! Your friend ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: Lost and Found
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Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: To Be Perfect
I completly forgot to edit thanks for the reminder. Man that was dumb!
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: If My Life Were A Dream
To awnser you I would have to say that only the first stanzas need working on I hope that helps you enough!
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Fallen Angel
It was great. I love the characters and I thought it was really well writen! Good job
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: The Midnight Wolf
Amazing. You were very descriptive and I really like that. The ending was also very nice.
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: The Lost, Chapter 1
It's really good. I like the plot very much. I also really like Bubbly. I think you captured cild innocence perfectly. I can't wait for more!
Jul 5, 2011
