alittlelost

Absolutely love this! Your descriptions are vivid and impactful. I love concept you’ve chosen to describe and especially the words you’ve chosen to use. The lines, “that mirror was my ...

Hello! Although I’m not the biggest fan of repetition, I really like how you used it in this poem. I especially liked the line “fallen so far in love”, it ...

Wow! This is beautiful, I love the italics, quotations and the emphasis used. The last paragraph is my favourite, it concludes the poem with a thoughtful touch and flows (with ...

I’m not an expert, but in my opinion, I think that it would serve you better if the piece was put into paragraphs. This way it would look less overwhelming ...

I am no expert but from a reader’s perspective I find this piece really well put together. I enjoy the structure as it differentiates from most, making it appear intriguing ...