aliepalie

I really liked this piece. It was very intense, and I couldn't help to read further. Most of the time I don't really like stories with that much action and ...

Hi there! I definitely agree with wickedwonder, but I do like the piece. I mean it wasn't that hard. She's right about the mary-sue thing though. And I saw a ...

awesome, it gave me goosebumps! The idea that this is a dream is cool, and I don't think the idea is used before. I'm not really good at grammar, so ...

I really liked it, it's not too long, but it tells the complete story. Well done. There were some grammar mistakes though.. Your probably wondering, how have they got away ...

Awesome opening for a novel! I love the way you described everything, it made me wanna read further. I really liked the ending too, harsh, but at the same time, ...

Okay, I really like this story so far. I didn't know what was gonna happen, and when the naked girl came in view, I thought she would be something like ...

Awesome, I love it! An angel and a demon, how did you think of those two together!? Well done! Still I saw a little mistake: I felt like screaming,it hurt ...

Oh my.. How I love this story! Well done! I was really wondering who the person was who did all this to her, but to my surprise it wasn't a ...

Nice. I love the action, and the driving along the road. Also, the person is described very human, with his own shortcomings. Still there was a thing that bothered me: ...

I really liked it! This is exactly how I feel about inspiration, and it's also exactly the way you described it. (right now it definitely is like this..: ) Sometimes, ...

Hello, Aliepalie here. I really liked the story. Still there were some things that bothered me. The blow had cut to the bone; the blade had only stopped cutting through ...

At first I thought: Yay! Vampire! Then I thought: No! Mary Sue! I could talk to animals, shape shift into any animal I wanted for as long as I wanted ...

Wow. I could really feel the emotion, it was so touching. You stopped it right before the climax, and that makes it even better. I really liked it. At first ...

Haha, nice story. I like aliens. And I like the way you wrote the part where the main charakter wakes up. Also, I really liked the way you described the ...

Nice. I really like her. The story was awesome too, I read it two times over, just to enjoy the story all over again. You made very good use of ...