aliceceleste

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, so thank you very much! It is a very touching and emotional subject, but you handled it delicately and with great ease. I really like ...

Hi there! This was such a lovely piece of writing, because it was quite bittersweet at the same time. I couldn't spot any grammar or spelling mistakes at all, and ...

This is a brilliant piece of writing focusing on a very sensitive subject. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, however I do have some constructive criticism. A few grammar and spelling ...

Lovely piece of descriptive writing; the reader is really able to imagine themselves in this scene. However, I would have loved you to elaborate on the character in this piece ...

Hi there, This was much better than I expected when first reading it. I would have loved some background information on Princess Isabella and Gerard, maybe Gerard could have had ...

Hey there, I am going to review this lovely piece of writing! First of all, congratulations on successfully carrying so much emotion throughout. I think switching back to the past ...

I really loved the descriptions and detail that you included in this, it has left me wanting to read more! It did leave me some questions, such as why Erin ...

I loved this! The ending was sad, but in a way that's a good thing because it leaves you with more to think about. I couldn't see any major grammatical ...

Wow, I really enjoyed reading this- thank you! I found it quite mysterious because you only hinted at what gender the characters were, and there wasn't much information actually revealed; ...

Hi, I think there is a really good idea behind this, and I like what you did. However, I have a few critical comments; My personal opinion is that it ...