ajruby12

It's a personal preference to make things rhyme. I just like it a whole bunch better that way... But thanks for the advice!

Thank you! The "That is all" was intentional to make it kind of abrupt and such. But thanks for reading it, even though it started with "Roses are red". :)

Hey! ajruby12 here. I'm not going to try to do a review on this. It just seems... so perfect! It's really beautiful and very relatable. (But I'm sure you don't ...

Thank you! It's still a work in progress.

Thanks for the feedback! And yes, I know everything went too quickly, but I haven't had the time to expound upon it.

Believe me, I can take all the critique. :) But yes, I agree with almost everything you've said. I'm horrid about proper format, but I'm working on it, slowly but ...

Thank you! I do wish that I had been able to expand it a little more but I was in a word crunch, since I had to send it in ...

It is a bit rushed, because I was sending it into a contest and there was a limit to how long it could be, so I had to crunch it ...

Yeah, I know... I sent it into an essay contest and so with the spacing and everything, it looks pretty mangled. But thanks!

ha, I actually wrote this in math class.. :) (yeah, I know.. Naughty me..)

It's kind of a collective term.. But I know what you mean!

I know that many people are confused about why the last 4 lines are in there.. It's not just for children, but it's basically meaning that you can't "huddle up" ...

The main problem you have is you DON'T know what's coming next, correct? Everything is high-speed for a reason, because that's how Faith feels. You understand just about as much ...

I'm a year away from highschool but already doing 2 highschool classes.. (Yay for co-op!! And homeschooling!) :)

First off, the "reality of today" is telling people to not live in a fantasy, so to speak. The "long harsh look" is the eye opening expirience of someone who ...