ajruby12

Thanks for the suggestion! I'll make sure to change that..

Ha, I copy and pasted this from an email.. (I really don't like it when the format gets changed and you don't realize it..)

Thank you! I've been told I have a talent for it.. :) But I'm really trying to become a better writer/poet.

Thanks! :)

I really wish I had the writing capability that you and several other authors on this site have.. Just saying..

Ah. Well, that does make a little more sense. :)

But I do want to add on the the word choices are good. And I really don't want to be negative, but..

I understand what you're getting at there.. I'm working on answering a couple more questions that are left in the air but as I said, the story revolves around the ...

Ah.. What can I say? Ignore that, please.. I wasn't paying attention.

Well, many of those things are planning to be answered in future chapters, since the whole story basically revolves around the characters, which is discovered as more are introduced. (Any ...

Ha, I try..

Ah.. For me, I didn't tie those things together. But it could be just me, I suppose.

Ow.. I got about 6 seconds into it and my head started to hurt.. I started skimming and almost threw up.. Did you think up this??

Thank you so much! I love it when people can enjoy the things that pop out of my head. :)

Thanks for the review! And yes, I'm obviously a Christian.. God is a big part of my life..