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  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: The Case Against Cassandra

    Thanks for the review! To answer your question about the "obvious question" in the story, it really isn't often a factor of family or environment, but Cassie's choice to be ...

    Jan 7, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: The Case Against Cassandra

    Thanks so much for the review! I tried to go through and shorten this story, since it's so long, but I really couldn't, so not many people have read it. ...

    Dec 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: This Too Shall Pass

    I hate poems that don't get you anywhere through your struggles. I have hope to get through it, and that's what I like to convey. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

    Dec 21, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, Horror Re: Christmas Fears

    Thanks for the comments! I'm really happy to see people enjoying this. :) And yeah, maybe I should have made it longer... I just don't like reading (or writing) stories ...

    Dec 10, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: The Realm of Lousy Characters, Episode #1

    Thanks for the comments! I'm hoping to do a few of these "episode" type things, although not too many. Let's not get too crazy here. xD

    Dec 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Medic and Doc

    Ohh, i gotcha now. That just totally breezed by my poor little brain. xD

    Dec 6, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Realistic Re: The Story Never Written

    Thanks for the comments! I'm hoping to do a little more work on this story in the future (adding it to an overflowing pile), and I'll be fixing some of ...

    Dec 6, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, Horror Re: Christmas Fears

    Ha, I didn't even mean for it to be too scary! xD I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm really not that great at any horror-like story, so this took a ...

    Dec 6, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: The Realm of Lousy Characters, Episode #1

    Well, this story was set up in the intro/prologue, so it's very helpful to read that first. This is one of a series, so the intro is to introduce the ...

    Dec 6, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, Horror Re: Christmas Fears

    Thanks for the comment! Oops, I guess I didn't check thoroughly enough for grammar. I'll have to do a second pass. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it! This was just ...

    Dec 5, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Hidden Truths, Brazen Lies Chap. 6

    Thanks for the review! Yay, returning reviewer! xD I did realize that I wrote pretty clipped in this chapter. I'm planning on going back and adding details, like distance and ...

    Oct 31, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Hidden Truths, Brazen Lies Chap. 6

    Thanks for the comments! I know it's hard to jump into the middle of a novel (I hate doing that!), so I thought a summary would be helpful! I'm glad ...

    Oct 31, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Culture Re: Hope Through the Years

    Thanks for the review! I left Katherine Bates's identity as the author of the song as a known, based on my audience. And then I was just on my time ...

    Oct 29, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Culture Re: Hope Through the Years

    Thanks for the review! This is intended to be an inspirational piece, so (not saying this is a good thing) I had to leave things fairly general and not quite ...

    Oct 29, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Culture Re: Hope Through the Years

    Thanks for the review! Unfortunately, I was right at the word limit for this essay (it had to be spoken in a certain time limit), so I had to cut ...

    Oct 29, 2017


Most things happen for a reason. Though, usually, the forces that be are immature enough that the reason is comedy.
— WeepingWisteria