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Hello you, Yes you. How are you? Doing well? Here's a ticket Down to hell. For if you read on, I shall warn, You'll sin yourself, And die forlorn. You're ...

Sometimes we still breathe in chalky rubber And feel the setting sun on our skin, The sea of asphalt burning our feet Sometimes we still hear rubber hitting pavement As ...

I’ve been to worse places than this, I think, As I wake up with a knife in my bed Like a child wakes up with a teddy bear. I have ...

Oh angel of fate I do not believe, That the fate you have chosen is the fate for me. For I make my own fate you cant hold me in, ...

All that I've done is reeked with the stench of love a selfishness while martyrs scream My pride was their downfall they will never get to feel this pain A ...

The way you move, the way you hear, the way your voice sings in my ear, on those lonely nights. The air in my lungs burns as I look at ...

"This is our decision, to live fast and die young... Yeah it's overwhelming, but what else can we do? Get jobs in offices and wake up for the morning commute? ...

Appearances are 'over rated.' So why do I still care? Everyones opinions, everyones stares. I've changed myself, more than I should. It brings back memories of my childhood. They made ...

What I read of this was very good! Almost poetic!!!!!!! Though I have to admit that i didn't read very far because i was getting ready to go somwhere at ...

Hey! Awesome poem! It totaly tells a great story, of love and sorrow, and so many things. And it really paints a picture! There was one place where I found ...

Hey! this is really good! i think your chose of words in alot of places were placed very carefully, and played together really well! Just a few things to point ...

This is exellant and true! I think the way you said america before every sentance though, got a bit reapetative. Maybe just put it like in the fist sentance and ...

I loved it over all! The end part was kind of off course and random cause it didn't really fit the rest of your whole rigm sceme, but the poem ...

Wow! The plot is great and the way you chose to place your words so carefuly as you did, made this all the better of a fantastic story! Your spelling ...

This-is-awesome! You have a way with poetry. A very lyrical flow that seems to slip beneath your pen and onto the paper without effort or fear. This is so very ...