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Re: My Name is ____ and I'm an Alcoholic
Lylas Your poem was extremely deep. I was most intrigued by the double function of alcohol as it is the substance that mollifies and wounds the speaker. The alcohol seems ...
May 23, 2015 -
Re: What If...
Hello TealElephant You're poem is thought provoking. I interpreted the first stanza as a suggestion to appreciate the balance as a result of the differences between people. People may perceive ...
May 23, 2015 -
Re: Ireland Calls Me Home
CelticThunder1438 I loved your poem. It's amazing how you personified Ireland. For example, when you use the castles to call the speaker home it reminds me of a romantic relationship ...
May 23, 2015 -
Re: .
I really enjoyed how you showcased coffee, a mundane concept, and gave it such power. The coffee controls a large portion of the speaker's life. For one, it allows the ...
May 23, 2015 -
Re: Where?
Honeybadger23, your poem is quite interesting. In the first two lines I got the sense that you were referencing death. Just as flowers shrivel and die so too do good ...
May 20, 2015
