afrounicorn

Hi. I am back after reading your Love story. Again besides what other people say, I love it. I think I understand your writing. You write from experience, when you ...

Thank you for writing this. I think this really needed to be said. Love is just really a illusion. I mean do not get me wrong, it is a wonderful ...

Hello. I love the story. Besides the mistakes everyone points out, I love it because if you have been in the situation mentioned it is easy to understand everything. You ...

It does flow very nicely. All I found were a couple grammar errors, but other than that it is fantastic. Please continue with the story, for you have piqued my ...

The way you write is so smooth, keeping pace and better yet keeping my attention through out. This is but a seedling to a larger piece I feel. You could ...

Hi, this is actually the first story I have read on the website and I have to say, what a way to start. You know this already and I believe ...