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When you pick another epigraph, make it obivous to the reader that its an epigraph, so imcompitant people wont run and scream plagerism. For example, you can italize it so ...

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We crissed, we crossed, Standing on the damp, cool grass, Watching the world pass us by On this dark night. Seeing by the light of fireflies. You and me, Catching ...

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I totally agree with you. This was a good poem. It really refects on your depth. The nothing really to say because you are on point with this poem.

This poem was perfect. I like how you compared love to music. It was very poetic. I don't have anything to criticize.

This was beautiful. It acutally felt like a lullaby. It was very warm ,very tender there are no mistakes in this. It was perfect. :D

It would grab my attention.

This is good. I really don't see any problem with it.

Unusual romance. It is different from romance cliches like: "I need you", "I don't know what to say to you". The no problems in this poem for me. I liked ...

That was funny, witty, and clever. I loved it. It is impressive how you can be so informed about the stock market in 5th grade. Great poem! Rock on :D.

Okay. I didn't get it. To me it was basically a guy and his skanky girlfriend. I really can't review this.

I thought it was very pretty.

That was good- send it to him. I liked the metaphors and the imgary. Men don't know how love affects women!