adelina

hey french adel, here so about your story people have alredy covered you on the basis of grammer so it would be annoying if I reapeted it, believe me, i ...

hi i'm adelina and i'm going to be reviewing your peice of writing ok let me just say i've only understood a jist of the story. it's very confusing. it's ...

hi i'm adelina i'm here to review I think you should work on your spellings and grammer your style of writing could be improved a bit. I think your rushing ...

hi i'm adelina i'm here to review I think you should work on your spellings and grammer your style of writing could be improved a bit. I think your rushing ...

this story frankly speaking great start See firstly the guy seems a little but feminine, and the girl telling the guy her problems seems to rushed. why I'm telling you ...

hi i am adelina i come in peace and i am here to review your story, I'm gonna be frank I'm not a really into deep romance stories but your ...

a review from moi the beggining is a little confusing, it's sort of blurred you should work on that and you've made a few grammer mistakes such as; "you don't ...

i think this story could go a long way keep it up

dude, i think that way you make the character describe the scenario its just breath taking the concept aint half bad either adelina

Hey! what's up i'm just talk about your amazing story here. now i personally think it was mostly flawless, also i think lycando was right about the scathing bit, you ...