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Adelaide Elizabeth

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: They say

    This piece is short but well-written. It portrays an engaging description of the girl's feelings in the situation. The use of the statement "girl toughen up". adds a layer of ...

    Aug 25, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Home ¿

    This piece is written quite well and the experiences it describes along with the picture it paints is one I feel many people can relate to. I do feel like ...

    Aug 25, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: raising dreams

    This is a lovely poem with really good imagery and description. I love how it seems to pull you along through the writer's thoughts in a way that weaves a ...

    Aug 25, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Wonderland Wanderlusters #FriendshipPoems

    I have one thing to say. THIS POEM IS BEAUTIFUL! I grew up reading Alice's Adventures in Wonderland and so I love anything and everything related to it. This poem ...

    Aug 25, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Empty Canvas

    This poem is great, I love how it flows, it is beautifully written and the picture it paints to the reader is interesting. I feel like you described the feeling ...

    Mar 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Wings

    I love the wording of this piece, it's beautiful. I enjoy how the perspective is that of a young girl, it adds character and more meaning to the poem. The ...

    Mar 5, 2018


We think in generalities, but we live in details.
— Alfred North Whitehead