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I truly enjoyed the theme and the concept of your poem. Shocks! I love your avatar (I don't know how it is called)! Simply because I also love Math :)) ...

Hello! I love the poem. It is something optimistic and humorous :D I can't really criticize it since I already find it good. Just keep writing! Thumbs up! :D

Hello! I'll rate your poem as good :) I find it easy to understand. Well done! I can just see correction: "Your With Me" This is the common mistake I ...

I love your poem! I can truly relate on it :D especially on your ending line :D I won't criticize your work anymore since I already find it good. Keep ...

I love your imagery! :D You just exactly described what a girl feels. It is simple but full of life and meaning! I won't criticize your work anymore since I ...

Short but really truly amazing! It sounds deep but it's not really that too hard to understand :D This is what they call "Write to express, not to impress. " ...

Hello! I just noticed some corrections: "But.... Im To Young For Love." The "Im" is not punctuated. It should be "I'm" then the "To" must be "too." "Dont Want Love." ...

I find this piece really clever. I like it :D Well done :D I won't correct it anymore since it's not really that necessary. Good job! Keep it up!

"Even love has to go...Even love has to die...Others leave altogether...And love is a game." I like the topic of your poem. I thought it's something like an inspirational theme ...

I really liked the description :D Nice choice of words! You got a very interesting way of picturing the scene. It has a dark color and I like it, rawr. ...

I like the overall meaning. It's true that the world is a one big masquerade and everyone hides behind his mask :D Only one point: the rhyming is so confusing. ...

I super like your piece! It makes me crave for watermelons although it's wet season already in the country :D I find it clever for you to go with watermelon ...

Hello! I like your story. I want to see more of it! Yes, I do think you might consider adding more paragraphs but that's a great start! Thumbs up! :) ...

"fog surrounds me, a deepening mist......": I ain't really sure about the punctuation you used because I rarely see it in poems but maybe it'll be interesting if the punctuation ...

I remember the poems I wrote last year because of a guy, by your work. I can really relate myself on your poem. Gosh, my heart is somewhat jumping again! ...