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Re: Colourland
abachmann here with a review! Disclaimer: This review is not meant to hurt your feelings or criticize your writing. Please do not feel offended. Ok, lets begin with this review. ...
Nov 14, 2019 -
Re: Where Are They Now?-A Memorial To Tony Stark
Well did not expect to have my heart broken today, but what can you do right? Huge Marvel Fan right here. This was so cute. I love how you incorporated ...
Nov 8, 2019 -
Re: I Smashed My Mirror
Oh My Goodness! Gave me shivers!! Not only was this beautifully written, but I love it because I personally relate to this. I think the idea you have here is ...
Nov 6, 2019 -
Re: Bleach and Lemons
Wow! This is really interesting. Your wording is very well done. You make the reading feel only the poem, nothing else in the moment they are reading. This is easy ...
Nov 6, 2019 -
Re: A poem about writing
abachmann here!! Wow this is really cool. I think what you did here is very smart. I think what your meaning here is how you feel that your story is ...
Nov 5, 2019 -
Re: Empty, Silent, and lost
abachmann here! Wow! Reading this literally gave me chills. You have such a talent. It takes an amazing poet to give a feeling like that too a reader. Amazing. You ...
Nov 5, 2019