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Thank you for taking the time to look at this. I appreciate it a lot. This will definitely help when it's time to write the second draft! Thanks again

Thank you very much for this review. I was really unsure about the pacing so glad to have feedback on that in particular. Also I agree very much with the ...

No worries at all. I'm the exact same when it comes to bland characters. I understand the concept behind it but fall short on the execution. That said, I do ...

I know what you mean! I'd hate to get far into a story to then learn which areas I could improve on. By the way I thought about this story ...

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I comment you for writing this well in a second language! Usually I can tell but I had no idea!

No problem! Welcome to the site. You can tag by using @ followed by the username. @JaxSamford Quoting works by using HTML quote tags on either side of the quote ...

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Accidentally didn't click "review" first time around. Mods can this be deleted please?! Thanks!

If I stop reading a story then I'm not going to have a lot of thoughts to share about it, and if I stop reading extremely quickly, I'm pretty much ...

Haha, I just re-read it now knowing it's a satirical piece. That does make a lot more sense now. I'll watch out for genre tags if I review poetry again. ...

I don't usually write or review poetry, although I do read a lot of the ones posted here, just cause. The only reason I'm reviewing this one is because I ...

Thanks for the review! I'll take this on board and see if I can find a better, non-cliche angle when I finally go back and rewrite it. This is what ...

Thanks so much for the review. I agree the transition from woods to headquarters was strange, or perhaps even plain unnecessary. Thanks for pointing it out and it's definitely something ...