Zontafer

Wow. That end. I wouldn't expect that one. Near the end you managed to do a GREAT job keeping the reader excited for what's next, and wanting to read next ...

Hello! I'm gonna give you a little review! First of all, you said sorry for such a boring chapter. I didn't find it boring at all! I was hooked all ...

Hello there, going to give you a short review as I promised! :) First of all, even though this is very short, I got drawn in when I read about ...

Hello again! This is going to be a short review since you have gotten so many already. :) So, at first I thought this was a little long for me, ...

Wow! A beautiful and exciting chapter! You've done a great job with descriptions, it really feels like you are in the story. One thing I'd agree with, is to give ...

WOW, just wow. This was a great poem. Fallen Angels have hollow hearts, One of Hell's unperfected arts. The part I quoted above was definitely the best. I do not ...

A pretty good chapter! The story didn't seem like anything I've read before, and got me interested in knowing more of her past, perhaps a prologue would fit? One thing ...

Wow. This poem was great. I liked the story beneath and that all of the text made sense, instead of putting in random words that fit. I am unsure if ...

Wow this is great! Even though I hate reading prologues, this was a really nice length, and not too describing about everything, which can make it pretty boring to read. ...

I used to play LoL before and I got very excited when I noticed what this was about. I noticed some mistakes too, but BiscuitsBatchAvoy already mentioned them. I agree ...

First of all, when they we're talking about the Rangers, my first thought was definetly the Night Watch from Game of Thrones. :D I agree with ahollander about the back ...