Zolen

This shall be a reaction based review, where I express my thoughts and point out errors as I read. Hopefully this is useful to you. Note I won't spend any ...

This shall be a reaction based review, where I express my thoughts and point out errors as I read. Hopefully this is useful to you. Note I won't spend any ...

This shall be a reaction based review, where I express my thoughts and point out errors as I read. Hopefully this is useful to you. Note I won't spend any ...

This shall be a reaction based review, where I express my thoughts and point out errors as I read. Note I have not read anything before this chapter so I ...

This is going to be a reaction themed review mixed with nitpicks on spelling and grammar as I spot it. Hopefully this helps you. Note that I have not read ...

Third reaction review. The only good thing he had gained from the discussion was the apple in his pocket that he had stolen from the fruit basket on the table. ...

Third reaction review. A bit short. but insane to murder unarmed villagers. History wise, most soldiers came from well to do families, and because of that sense of privilege they ...

Second reaction review, hopefully this is useful to you. The figure he believed to be Markoff didn’t collapse or bleed. As a matter of fact, he hadn’t even flinched or ...

Zolens second reaction review to your stuff, everything I shall type is my first thoughts as I read though it, which you might find useful. Nitpicks are mixed in. Even ...

Nitpicks: kidnapped her to I feel like you should do more to emphasize 'her', if only because it might be missed by those who skim stories, or speed read a ...

Thoughts as a read, written as I was reading so you get a good idea how your words are being interpreted somewhat, which you might find useful: For some reason, ...

Now to try at reviewing, going to be a tad thin, but hopefully this helps in some way. Nit picks: Blackwood were packed with people; This line feels wrong to ...

This is quite a nice opening really, with a interesting enough character, but the title doesn't really mix well in my eyes, unless this story will eventually be covered by ...

nitpicks I want to see put but that need the help put couldn’t get but know his colleague and boss did It Anna” did it Anna. questions like way did ...

In response to your review, and because I need the points I looked into a story with the least number of reviews. Nit picks but it was the pose I ...