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Re: The Attic
Wow. Wow. First of all, can I say that this poem gave me the chills, in fact, I was probably shaking the whole time. You did a really good job ...
Nov 6, 2020 -
Re: Goodbye
Beautiful poem, very relatable, that's actually happening to me right now, I have a friend and I feel like we're just growing farther and farther apart. This is about this ...
Nov 6, 2020 -
Re: If Only
The simplicity of this poem is beautiful, by simplicity, I mean you don't use a lot of words to describe this but you manage to make it feel whole and ...
Nov 6, 2020 -
Re: love me like i love the moon
I think it's absolutely stunning, how you used the phases of the moon as a collection of poems. It adds a beautiful touch of elegance to the poems. Each short ...
Nov 6, 2020 -
Re: The End
Wow, this is truly a stunning poem. I love the rhyming pattern, it really resonates with the poem and really makes it flow nicely. The last stanza is beautiful, a ...
Nov 6, 2020 -
Re: The Abyss
Nice! Great job with this poem, It's very powerful, and I especially liked the first two lines, and how they rhymed. I think when you go on to say It ...
Nov 5, 2020
